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Prom
Date story illustration
(Dramatic structure)
Every story has three parts. This is called the three
act structure. Stories develop better if you have the three act structure
in the back of your mind. Studying story structure is exciting…
I can not tell a lie - actually it can be mind numbing. So let’s not study
structure. Instead, see if you can pick out the important elements in a
sample story, Prom Date, a story of personal triumph. (Prom Date
is a half-hour to one-hour story.)

Act I
The drama in the first few minutes must be powerful
enough to captivate the viewer. So some conflict, or problem, builds and
builds until the good guy (protagonist) decides he has to solve it. The
synopsis that follows tells the dramatic action, but not the settings.
Try to see a conflict developing in Act I.
The story
The Prom is days away. Shaun doesn’t have a date
and his sister Elizabeth teases him mercilessly about it. He wishes he
could get a date with Laura for the prom. But just as he is about to ask
Elizabeth if she thinks Laura would go with him, Shaun sees Laura ride
away with a bunch of girls. They are waving to Dave the Geek. Shaun wonders
what Laura could possibly see in a geek.
Shaun is shy, so he asks his best friend Tim to fix
him up with Laura. Tim pretends to ask Laura to date Shaun, but instead
he tells Laura lies about Shaun. Laura is sorry to hear the negative stories
- she likes Shaun. She thanks Tim for being such a friend.
Shaun and Tim are preparing for an experimental model
plane match. Shaun can't get his model plane wings the right size so it
will fly, but Tim's plane flies like a jet. Discouraged, Shaun lets his
"race car" plane drive into a wall where it breaks into pieces. He declares
to everyone that the prom is the only meaningful event for the entire year
for him. He isn’t going to study or work on his plane - he is going to
finish the year by getting a date with Laura.
Some points about Act I
The point where characters make major decisions and
shove the story in a new direction is called a "turning point." What was
Shaun's turning point?
So, what is the conflict? A bad plane? A bad year
in school? Shaun wants to date Laura? Shaun’s best friend Tim is a rat?
There are many conflicts in this story, but only one main conflict. The
big conflict for Shaun’s year is getting a date with Laura. The audience
knows by the end of part one what the story is about, and what the main
conflict is.
Act II
No problems get fixed in Act I Or Act II. Act II
is the main part of the play - over half of the story. It’s also the part
where the story can sag, and the audience can leave the theater cursing
all the names in the opening credits. But in a well plotted Act II, the
tension rises as the conflict gets bigger and bigger. The good guy finds
the problem gets harder and harder to solve. With each try he fails, while
the bad guy (antagonist) laughs at him. The audience sits spellbound while
the good guy (protagonist) struggles to get what he wants. Try to spot
the things in Act II that make the problem bigger.
The story
Shaun tries to impress Laura and ask her for the
date, but Dave the Geek is always with her and always getting in the way.
Shaun thinks Dave is his rival, so Shaun tries to outdo Dave in math class.
Dave makes Shaun look like a kindergarten mathematician.
Tim tries to convince Shaun that Laura is out of
his league - she only dates the really smart guys who are headed for college.
Trying to get a date with her is hopeless.
Shaun shows up at her door one afternoon in his old
car. He tries again to ask for a date and she humors him. Before Shaun
finishes, a wealthy college guy, Colin, shows up in a cool new car and
leaves with Laura. Shaun learns that Laura is now dating this guy, destroying
Shaun's hopes.
Tim tells a friend that Colin is secretly seeing
someone else, is using Laura, and is going to dump her just before the
prom. Tim expects to catch her on the rebound.
Shaun broods in his room. His father fixed a part
that Shaun thought was broken forever and gives it to him. Together they
put the plane back together. But that evening, Shaun gets hopelessly stuck
on a math problem that would help him correct the lift ratio on his experimental
model plane. He leaves a message on an Internet newsgroup, but an answer
might not come for days.
The next day Shaun gets stuck waiting with Dave in
a car in the rain at a ball game. He can hardly bring himself to ask Dave
for help, but finally tells Dave he knows of a problem Dave couldn’t solve,
and they start to work on the math problem. Dave shows Shaun that he almost
has the answer, all he had to do was keep working on it. Shaun says, "I
wish everything in life was that way." They get into a conversation about
wanting things, and Shaun finally tells that he wants something he can’t
have - Laura. Dave reveals he had no interest in Laura, he was just tutoring
her in math - Dave's girl friend goes to a private school. Shaun asks Dave
how to talk to Laura. Dave says, "Just like you talk to me, like a person."
Then Dave tells him a secret: Colin's real girl friend also goes to the
private school, and Colin is dating Laura to make his real girl friend
jealous.
Some points about Act II
What happens in Act II? Does the tension build? First
Dave is in Shaun’s way when he tries to ask for a date, then Shaun tries
to outdo Dave but makes himself look stupid instead. Tim then tries to
convince Shaun that Laura is just out of reach for him. That advice had
to hurt, coming from his best friend. Shaun tries one more time to ask
for a date, but his worst fears are realized - Colin is there and is dating
Laura. How big is the problem - how demoralized is Shaun? Shaun broods
in his room and goes back to working on his model plane. He has lost -
it’s hopeless. This is usually what happens in Act II.
But another thing also usually happens in Act II.
Just when things look darkest, there is a glimmer of hope, and the good
guy decides he is going to fight for all he is worth to get what he wants.
This puts us into Act III.
Act III
In Act III the good guy confronts his worst fears,
fights his biggest battle, and wins. That’s life - some day, some way,
we win what we want. Or we learn something from the battle and change direction.
The victories are what we write stories about. The other battles just continue
another day maybe years in the future, or we change direction - we never
lose except when we’re the bad guy. See how hard Shaun has to fight for
what he wants in Act III.
The story
Shaun races to Laura's home, but Colin's car is parked
in the drive and they are sitting on the front porch. Shaun circles the
block, working up courage, then goes to Laura. Shaun asks Colin when he
is going to stop seeing this other girl. Colin angrily denies he is seeing
the other girl. Colin goes on the attach and begins spouting the same lies
Tim had told Laura. Shaun denies them, but Colin says that Shaun’s best
friend Tim is the one who revealed all this dirt about him - so they know
it is true.
Shaun is badly shaken. His best friend has lied about
him, and the girl he cares about believes it. He knows he looks bad and
begins to back away. Then he remembers his conversation with Dave about
being so close to solving a problem if he would just work a little longer
on it - and he remembers what good thing happened when he talked to Dave
instead of hating him. He realizes backing away isn’t the thing he should
do. He turns back and refutes all the lies, then says again that Colin
is just using Laura "according to Dave." Laura knows Dave wouldn’t lie.
Colin sees he has been destroyed and flees. Shaun asks Laura to the prom.
Without hesitation she says, "Yes."
Prom night, Laura tells Shaun that Tim and Colin
are friends. Shaun confronts Tim with the lies on the dance floor, and
Tim exits, so embarrassed he leaves his date standing by herself on the
dance floor. The next day at the model plane match, Shaun's and Tim's planes
compete. Shaun's wins the match. Shaun leaves with Laura, Dave, and the
trophy.
Some points about Act III
Did Shaun have his biggest battle that brought out
his inner strength? Confronting Colin and the pack of lies took a lot of
courage, and Shaun had to overcome his fear of talking to people to do
it. Did he get what he wanted?
What else went into making this story?
Stories have a lot of things in them that make them
work. Understanding your characters’ hopes and fears is a major step in
creating the drama. The drama in a play results from the conflict between
the characters, and from each character's struggles. (Conflict is the heart
of drama.) Each character adds a bit of conflict: Shaun's sister
teases him. Tim betrays Shaun. Laura likes Shaun, but Tim dashes her hopes
as well as Shaun's. Shaun is jealous of Dave the Geek. Shaun's plane won't
fly.
During Act I the major characters are introduced.
If they just walk on and chat for a moment, no one will remember them.
The best way to introduce them is to show them involved in some problem
or conflict during Act I, and the sooner the better. By the end of Act
I, all the main characters show us what they want to do, and launch themselves
on a collision course. But the most important moment is the turning point
when the main character becomes determined he is going to get what he wants.
In Act II, the real problem is disguised. It is Shaun's
fear of communicating (actually fear of rejection or failure). His fear
prevents him from talking to people. If he had asked Laura instead of using
his sister and best friend, he would have gotten the date immediately.
If he had talked to Dave, he would have solved his model plane problem
much earlier, and also never have thought that Dave was his rival for Laura.
Sometimes the situation changes into something else.
For example the antagonist (bad guy) turns out to be a good guy and someone
else is the bad guy. In Prom Date, Tim turns out to be the bad guy
and Dave turns out to be the good guy. This is called a plot twist. The
viewer sometimes knows what is really going on, and other times is completely
surprised. Whether to let the viewer in on everything is part of strategy.
If it is a surprise, it has to look real, not like something added at the
last minute to make a surprise.
Act III typically is short. The story comes to a
climax, resolution and "denouement." The climax is the highest point of
tension - the big battle. The resolution means the conflict is resolved
- over forever.
The denouement (French, pronounced: day noo má,
- I pronounced this denewment in my first college theater class and was
very embarrassed) ties up loose ends and satisfies the viewer's emotions.
In this story, the subplot of the model airplane contest concludes the
story. Shaun wins the race, rubbing Villain Tim's face in the dirt. Shaun
has a new friend, Dave, and then walks away with Laura. Often stories have
no denouement, ending at the resolution (especially thrillers and other
action movies). When it's over, it's over.
Optional Review Questions (Do these! These are
fun.)
Hey! You're trying to skip these and I put
a lot of work into making these fun. You probably think you haven't learned
a thing, but see what you know already - this isn't a test, it's reinforcement,
and it will make you feel good and maybe get you a date... Maybe not if
you're wearing loose fitting clothes with large vegetable patterns.
1) The three act structure:
a. Is a bogus contrivance of Aristotle,
who lived thousands of years before film and television, before anyone
really knew anything.
b. Can be used to help develop the very different
sections of a story.
c. Write the wrong answer here: _________________________________
2) The protagonist is:
a. The main character.
b. The "good guy" (usually).
c. The character who is struggling hardest to attain
something.
d. All of the above.
3) The antagonist:
a. Works against the "good guy."
b. Has mud on his hat and antagonizes the "good guy."
c. Is usually the "bad guy."
d. "a" and "c" look right, but will have to get back
to me about "b."
4) Act I:
a. Captures the audience with powerful drama
(conflict).
b. Introduces the main characters with strong entrances
(usually).
c. Shows us what the story is about.
d. Ends with a turning point where the protagonist
decides to go after what he wants.
e. Hopefully all of the above.
5) Act II:
a. Is the name of wearing apparel.
b. Sags badly because nothing much happens until
the end.
c. Is where the protagonist meets problems that get
bigger and bigger, until he finally is almost defeated, but finds the strength
to go after the prize in a final battle, which takes us into Act Three.
d. Is a waste of time because you really can just
cut to the chase.
6) Act III:
a. Is where the protagonist faces his biggest
challenge and reaches his goal.
b. Is the denouement where everything winds down
and ties up loose ends.
c. Is the third obstacle where the protagonist falls
flat on his face.
d. "a." and "b." are correct. Hey! You with the hair!
This is the right answer.
7) A turning point is:
a. Where the character makes a major change
in direction or intensity.
b. Where the story makes a major change in direction
or intensity.
c. Where the audience gets up and leaves the theater.
d. "a." and "b." are probably correct, but sometimes
"c." is unfortunately true.
8) The denouement is:
a. The ending.
b. Comes after the resolution.
c. When the audience becomes emotionally satisfied
with the outcome.
d. "a." "b." and "c." all have possibilities. Go
figure.
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