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Remodeling. Please pardon the heterogeneity and potsherds. < ; )
Blog: Nowhere Man
Blog: Nowhere Man
Blog: Nowhere Man
Established 1996
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Nowhere Man Blog
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13 - Midcourse Corrections Tue, 07/07/2009 - Scott After writing past the introduction, 30 - 34 pages, I evaluated my main characters. This is first a character driven story, and then plot driven, so the characterization must be good.I found that they were largely reacting to "Harry," which they should because Harry is their nemesis, but they were not reacting to each other. Not good. So I made a list of personal characteristics that people in their professions might exhibit. I selected the characteristics more likely to draw people into conflict, and then rewrote these pages. Much better. This same process will probably happen again in later rewrites.
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